TheFirstFirefly

alright, thank you

I just read chapter 1, and I would say, this is a good book. I enjoyed reading everything and wished I could for the rest, but I'm too busy. Anyway, if anyone is interested in the tags given or the synopsis. READ IT.

my goodness, i was drawn into the story that i felt their emotions in me. Good job!

To be honest, I do not know what to say.

to be honest, i don't know what to say

That's good to hear. Good luck!

As a busy author, I could not go further the prologue. But it looks interesting. The writing quality is good. As a dumb person, I can read and understand. The stability of updates, it doesn't matter to me as long as there is an update and upload of a chapter. The story development, the character design and the world background, I need to read more into it to know them, but I am confident that there are. Keep up the good work, and strive towards your goal.

I am sorry if I skimmed over the first chapter, but I found it really mysterious even at the beginning. And I love a mystery in the story. -The writing quality is readable and understandable. For someone who is dumb like me in processing words, I can read it. -The stability of updates... As an author who fails, I don't really mind the stability as long as you update and upload a chapter. -The story development, I will still have to read more, but I don't have time for that as an author trying to achieve something. However, looking at the number of chapters, there is a story. And that's what matters. -Character design and world background could be labeled as one, but my thoughts on it depends on the writing quality. So its as good as five stars. Good luck and God bless.