Also this is a after thought but to make it more realistic you can say that its a Atlantain curse that axel puts on her accidentally that forces her to experience all the pain she just felt forced upon her by his magic and hers

I would go against killing her and instead vite for her to live but having to live with everything she experienced unable to forget it no matter what she tries to do to forget.

Just wonderingis the novel real and if so what might be the name of said novel obviously it’s for a friend who is into that kind of novel’s

Dude you really need to keep this up because it is beautiful SpinOff of the original that makes it so much better and fixes the parts that sucked like how lanDon was always a sack of dead whight for hope amd everything so thank you for makeing landon kurby not be in a Relationship with hope

this is a good start i just with you wrote more it is to short .