silent_walker

Isn't that what happend? He could understand the new language and has superficial memories of Younger Zach. The Mc just hadn't consider the full implications and thinking himself just the same. I guess he's more individualist than most people.

Honestly i'd like update as soon as possible, but that isn't possible currently. I've limited time in hand and with that I started to publish another novel. Perhaps I'll conclude CC if that one does better. Also, CC was supposed to end in trilogy each on about 500 chapters long. Honestly, if I really wanted to complete the way I wanted it would only be myself at this point. As the novel barely earns anything, I couldn't just pour more time into it for nothing. Still, At the very least I wanted to end the first part 'Eye of Genesis' at some point, which still would be like 200 chapters more to get to a satisfying ending, even if I cut it short. As for the later two parts, I'll probably revist those plots with other book or make Elior and crew appear in the other book. thank you for your reading. As I have worked hard to improve my writing skills these few months, I can see how imaturish my writing was.

that was poorly executed

The thing with women was poorly done I must admit, in later chapters, there are some points to save the issue, dunno how well it worked .

yup

Well, you got a nice theory there, while I put so because he was becoming apathetic to mundane squabbles and becoming more like an unfeeling force of nature.

Read the second chapter. If I change something I'll mark them as Edited. So far the only big change is that, the reason behind Ian's madness was The Crippled God instead of the almighty.

so he should kill around 15, 16 years kids?

probably, but in uploaded chapters, there are only some hints of romance.

paused, but I'll continue in a few days.