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A witty, clever story about a young man who must battle supernatural forces to save this parents and his world in a modern everyday town. This story is also spiced with humor, mystery, and romance.

Zou Han’s training in the haunted house is really paying off! Adapting to memory loss ✅ Counter surveillance training ✅ Escaping ghosts ✅ Trusting Ge Chen for no reason ✅

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This is a review of the first 20 chapters. The book starts out with a developmentally handicapped 4 year old protagonist being throw into a snow bank in the middle of nowhere. She is found by the poor but kind Wang family; the Wang’s decided to raise her as their own child. Ah Yu, the protagonist, has a space, system, and good luck. With in a few months she saves the village from disasters and becomes everyone’s favorite child. So far, the child abuse and psychopathic elder biological sister are only obliquely mentioned. The beginning is a cute and fluffy childhood story about accepting an adopted girl into a large family in an ancient Chinese village.

I was expecting more character development before the protagonist’s easy win. The main character had no police/law enforcement/ forensic training before transmigrating with a detective system golden finger. In the first case, the golden finger replayed the whole murder before the protagonist put in any effort. Then, his boss agreed to arrest the suspect with out a warrant or any direct evidence in hand (Cultureal Differences?). I would have preferred if the system only told him that a murder occurred and then forced the protagonist to solve the rest himself. Bottom line the protagonist’s golden finger made him look cool to other characters but did not cause any personal growth.

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