lbaro97

When I read your synopsis I knew immediately that I would find a video clip like this somewhere in the comments. Love it!!! 😂

Loved it! And now I am lopking forward to the reactions and what comes next. 😃

Great chapter as always. Though I do have a question. Do you plan on going through every single episode of the curator? If we are now only at the end of the second episode, then I think it might be getting a little too long.

If this is a new novel, please post it as a separate story, not like this. Also, I would very much like to coninue reading the first story.

I am thinking just how bothersome it has to be to say the name of that metal several times in a conversation... 😅

You should calculate that again...

Allright. So if he wins the 3-star challenge, will he get an s-rank Badge?

Just to make sure I am getting this right: Mikail can collect S-rank badges while challenging on a 3 star level? 3 Star meaning he can only use up to silver stage Pokemon? And a 4 star challenge for an s-rank badge would include gold stage pokemon?

That was a good section. The increased amount of interaction between the shelder and Mikail immediately made it more interesting to read.

This is another example of a scene that could have been fleshed out some more. Even if it was relatively easy to subdue them, you could have taken the chance to showcase Hades prowess. Since all battle scenes are always summarized, I honestly don't know how much power a gold or dark gold stage Pokemon has. What exactly are they able to do? How much destruction? How large is the area they can affect with their attacks. You need to add some details, some comparisons, something to visualize it so we, the readers, can imagine it.