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nemesis has the intelligence of a hyper aggressive toddler last I checked and the reason he doesn’t want to show intelligence is to make his opponents think he is an artificial monster so shield and others would either hesitate to pursue it or would be misled into looking into the wrong things and waste their time (a bonus would be that shield might find some of the other evil organizations that like to make monsters like A.I.M)
super arrogant and shallow one dimensional character that was a copout for forced diversity after disney realized the mcu had only one significant female character and she had no powers so they shoved captain marvel down our throats
lol
what is cmdk
bro picked the two chicks he can get an element from lol
what type of pov is this it kinda is annoying
the part where you say as you can tell is fourth-wall breaking and immersion breaking
was he trying to say ‘nègro’ as in the colour black in spanish or are you making a slightly racist joke author?
bro died from the oldest trick in the book
author no offence but you have a bad habit of repeating sentences that mean the same thing in different words
I know you are referring to the lickers but nowhere did it say they were following him up the stairs
the first half and second half of the paragraph don’t match. In one he implies he is killing kingpin because it would be annoying if he stayed and in the next sentence he says he is leaving anyway
why expose your intelligence
doors are locked from outside
if you like the villain having plot armour go watch my hero the villain has more plot armour than batman and captain america combined
the competition? or the martians? because if you are speaking about the latter they are as technologicaly adept as cave men rn
ey my fellow readers I hear the dissatisfaction but the author clearly wants his character a certain way. If you guys don’t like it you can go and read the thousands of other stories that happen to have that perfect cookie cutter personality that you guys seek. The mc in this story voices his thoughts and does not hold them in like a jedi would nor indulges in them too much like a sith would
thats a big time skip 💀
why not show him to 049 bro would get on his hands and knees and worship bro