Awesome, thx for the great chap i was waiting for this, also love the romance between ruby and jaune, although they will have to explain that to ozpin and yang later xd

Hmm bills posessing pacifica? What about it? even if bills killed or destroy pacifica mc can simply restablish the timeline or make her come back to life with bills power, surely there is a control F for bills things he destroyed. Dont see the problem honestly

I think we all like amazonian Snu Snu xd

Lov this so much, and although this ''ring'' might be dangerous, personally i think its exacty what mc needs now, bills already know he f*ckd up when he mad a deal with mc after seeing the future he created and how he has a lot of ways to deal with him, and honestly i would guess he is sh*tting his pants right now, reason why he usd Pacifica as his card against mc, thinking he won't do anything agaisnt the woman he love/will love, but with this ring mc can ignore his affection for Pacifica and defeat bills, once he is over with this he can steal all the tech and Materials from the future take them to the past and start a SCP with the the tech and resourcces of hundreds of years, and since mc reset the timeline, nothing will happend to sinna, AM, Pacifica and the others. so everything ok :D

Really love the chapter, Although i still wants to see the reaction of both Universes to Alistair, the new omnitrix user, Alistair dating Jen, Jen dating Alistair. But as long as you dedicate 1 or 2 chaps to cover that later on, im ok. But Really love this chapter and for the Smut chaps i hope its Jen and Alistair Using their Omnitrix/Nemetrix to try some stuff, please have Jen using Four Arms. Anyway keep the awesome chap bro, cant wait to se the smut chap :D

Dont rewritte please xd, just improve it in future chaps

man i cant simply explain with words how much i really love this novel, you took an SI MC with a power that although its not really OP it has unlimited potential and let him in a universe we barely see but that has a lot of potential and turn the plot of that world into something so much bigger and interesting, i have never seen a novel transform the world the novel into something entirely different but at the same time incredibly interesting and surprisingly natural, the way all that universe changed so much thx to mc and tend to spin arround him with the rick and morty vibes but better is so cool, really man, keep the awesome work, also thx for updating more frequently :D

Nice, honestly your chap was good the only complain i have was that, you can fix that in later chaps with mc and jen presenting themselves in their home universes and making the proper introduction reaction chapter, once those 2 chaps are done you can take it esay and involved them slowly into the others universe. In Jen's case mc is already in all the news, since a new omnitrix user was helping jen tennyson, so Mc will just have to showed up desestimate bad rumours and introduce himself, for Mc its esier for jen, since mc is not famous across the galaxy community, so it wont be that shoking if another omnitrix user show up, at least not like it will be in jen's universe.

Besides there is nothing bad about Jen and Alistair revealing eachother to their universe and going public, eventually they will have to, i mean in alistair next one shot where he dates jen in her universe he cant hide because 1) people already know about him and have videos of him already rolling on the extranet by the moment he enter the plumber base 2) Jen is already too famous she cant avoid using her omnitrix for more than 5 mins, which will reveal their cover of mcs camouflage tech.3) unless they get a costume they will be recognized in their date, at least jen will.

Thats totally ok bro, and again you. Then again i will tell you, its simply impossible to ignore this forever, eventually as the relationship goes serious mc will have to reveal everything to everyone, his team because they will eventually know and all the earth and galactic comunity because he will have to explain why his girlfriend has an omnitrix. Also its impossible for jen to hide about mc, she is a famous hero and people from all the universe are always recording her, plus the plumbers who saw mc, a lot of people saw mc and jen figthing crime together, right now there must be a chaos because of a second user of a new omnitrix and people asking jen about Mc. There must be a lot of theories and controversia about it in the internet and extranet, and you cant avoid it, for jen at least.

Nah killed them is too esay he needs to humilliate them before telling them how he will make sure he wont create them in the past and kill/esterilize their ancestors to make sure the wknt be born, telling them how he will replace them once he reset this timeline by going back to the past with all the knowledge he stole from them.

Not gonna to lie I'm kinda disappointed with this chap, I mean don't get me wrong the chapter was epic like the rest of the chaps, but the thing is you completely skipped mc's explanation of the Jen 10 omniverse, the reaction of the group and the world at the confirmation that the multiverse exist, the reaction of mc's fan base and group at the fact he is not single and dating an alternate version of Ben, the only mention of Jen was here, which made me think I'm supposed to assume that now everyone knows about Jen but i don't know their thoughts an opinion on that, really bro why so allergic to show us this, Jen is the FML she has to be involved in the plot beyond simple one shots or mentions, im not asking to have her all the time, but at least show the impact she had on mc's universe and the move on, then you can slowly introduce her in the main plot.

Awesome, hope you make mc showed up to the council showing them how he killed time baby and got his powers also showing off the fact he absorbed and understand the entire knowledge of the future tecnology, even showing them how he improved those tech a lot of heights, b*tchslaping that teenager girl, also once he beat bills he should tell them how he will use the knowledge and tech form this future and improve it and use it in the past, resetting the timeline making sure to destroy them and tell them how he will replace them and make sure none of these traitors will be born or created by him.

He did finish one

Love the chapter, just hope you dont keep updating with a 2-4 delay months, at least try to make 1 or 2 updates per month

Aww too bad although i do agree it had a weird direcction, mainly because it was more a smut than anything i did enjoy the life is strange arc, its possible that later on you can make a multiverse fic but more serious and where the mc goes to that world like morty did?? Really like that interaction he had with max and chole flipping over a "dimensional adventurer"

Not so sure he did finish His league of legend fic, also the problem the author had was that he keep writing a lot of fics at the same time or never stayed longer in one single novel, he has been here in this ben 10 fic for a lot of time and it seems he is excited for it and had a lot of plans for it. I think thia time its diferent

Well what the hell i will give rick and morty another chance, i will simply skip most of the smut chaps and wait for some plot

Ok i will give it a try, my only problem with the morty fic was how long the smut lasted, too bad since i really wanted to read the life is strange arc but with ao much p*rn in the middle it wasnt worth it for me and i didnt want to skip that many chaps either

Is this novel going to be 98% smut like the morty fic or it will actually has a plot?