Damn_Toga

Your story is great but I noticed that it looks like you have some consistent grammar errors like... 1. There = Their 2. Emmidiently = immediately 3. Incrediable = Incredible It's very noticeable that I think you are doing it intentionally. It's not a big problem because I still can understand what you mean, but it's a little unpleasant in my eyes. If you have a problem with grammar, you can use ChatGPT to help you correct it or at least ask it to show the grammar errors in your text. I don't want to be a grammar Nazi, but at least fix those three grammar errors in your ff. No hard feelings, bro.

It's good, only until ch 17, before the author destroyed his story at ch 18 and the final line at ch 19 and decided to protect his little ego by saying don't like don't read. well don't cry when the rating of your story goes downhill.

at first I didn't believe it, but then I believe your comment, this story is really disturbed me, it's not that the story is bad but just unpleasant to read

glad you are back, your story is great and a lot of people want to read and support your story

then go sat on enel's lap[img=recommend]

This story is good, but only until chapter 98, Chapter 99 is what you call a forced plot, Luffy just suddenly becomes a full coward when some character is introduced when the author is just say bs that he is so strong and bla bla bla and luffy doesn't want to fight him because he scared to get hurt. Dude luffy doesn't scared about death, if your reason is he is not luffy because he is reincarnated person, then don't put him on luffy body, and another downside of this story is, (1) luffy just randomly invite anyone to become his crew, (2) the pace is slow (3) author intentionally make typo to trigger anyone who tried to correct him, which is childish

the thing about Danzo Shimura take an interest in mc is so bad, you don't properly tell Danzo is interested in mc, and just suddenly out of nowhere throw it there

just read this novel, this is so good, please don't drop this

the idea is good but the story is too poor, the plot is too forced, the power level is weird, and mc is just a machine killer who would kill anyone that offends him,

it's not necessary, it would be pretty bad if you decided to make a whole chapter for a side character backstory, even this is make me think it's useless to make this long