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If you want some idead about dream powers look at the fandom pf reverend insanity there is some creative stuff there and also i recommend this novel to anyone who pike an evil mc anti hero mc villain mc it also isnt cringy
Uhmm i am new to the one piece verse why would that be a problem?
I mean why does he think they wouldn’t meet? Pike i know because of him probably The butterfly effect?
? Bruh i hate it when fanfics make mc join luffy but i also wouldn’t wanna see luffy as a marine tf?
For the audience i dont wanna see luffy just stretching his hand and all that without the GOMU-GOMU NO
Luffy wouldnyell ima ge the king of pirates lol
True they can just go in the wild and have fun until they are needed not like a pokemon can be caught twice
He is gonna be op before the start wouldn’t that be boring nothing will be a challenge until probably later on
And u can say its the naruto world but yeah thhat doesnt bring u far
I swear i thought there was a secret time skip but nothing he did so far showed he was 5
This doesnt make sense or atleast it didn’t have the impact you probably desired tbh that was unnecessary
This is dumb thiugh Like i dont wanna say its bad to apologize but if she were offended there then you jnow what so why does he need to apologize when a shinobi should know what another shinobi is doing mbut i wanna say he is a kid but then he is also reincarnated or transmigrated
These guys talk too much they act like genin
What about if you show your talent oater on wouldnt that be suspicious too?
Tbh its better this way I dont think rin ever liked him? Except in the pure world or whatever And as you said its not the same Obito
Right? Thats whta they said in the anime
Mc is a genius right? And why directly after he transmigrates? Msybe take a rest, learn about your power even if the memory did help
Poeple who say they wanted a ruthless enel should stop it doesnt make sensei het it but still how can he do that when he isnt ruthless to begin with? The mc i mean and i also dont know how a sudden change in personality wil be explained tbh thats what i dislike the most about these sort of fics The sepf insert in a antagonist is always a 50/50 cz if the self insert is a good guy they try to change stuff Which i get but if you look at it from others pov its weird
I wish he didnt know of the plot that wiuld have been more fun him figuring everything out himself maybe as a kid Enel (he will stil eat the same devil fruit but still have meta knowledge)