Belthezzor

So, she says her loyalty is to the Garcias, but here she is operating behind his back and taking orders from Fury as if she works for Shield only. Makes no sense.

Uh, the "standard" fee of the goblins are stupidly high, and that Harry increased it even more, makes no sense. Real world investment managers only make 1-2% of the assets made on the account, barring smaller processing fees, etc. 20% is damn near what taxes would take depending on the amount made, and then taxes still have to come out. For as well read and "knowledgeable" as you try to make your Harry seem, he comes across as very ignorant here. I know that stories have Goblins be greedy, but even they would not be that much greedy, I don't think.

I don't understand why he would think his parents were in their thirties. They should be around 21 when they died, meaning that they had Harry at 20. They went to Hogwarts for the majority of the seventies, so depending on the which year in the seventies they started, the max age they could be when they died is 22. Unless you made this an AU and had the born much earlier and had Harry later in life.

It's not as solid as I thought it would be. It goes like this: some dialogue with weird speech patterns "blah blah blah," the MC grows powerful, "blah blah blah," the MC gets more powerful. The MC suddenly has rizz with just a few words and teasing, the MC suddenly gets more powerful, rinse and repeat. I'm not going to even mention the silly way "political maneuvering" is shown, not fleshed out, but just shown like everything else. Also, fanboys of the story don't even bother replying, you may like the story, but I don't and I don't care what you have to respond with. IF the author wants to fine, but I generally don't read replies anyway.

He's buying slippers? You mean the ones like flip flops?

Kelex: "it hold the knowledge to become the best soldier" AKA know how to plan, fight and survive in battle, etc. MC: "no, I don't need that" is he a moron? I can understand he has plans, but disregarding knowing how to fight? Dude is dumb AF. He is in DC, and as much as he might be one of those behind the scenes types, there will come time where he will have to know how to defend himself without pulling a Superman, just relying on brute force.

Did the Author forget about the Mind Stone? It also could be the energy the MC needs to cultivate, and neither the Ancient on or Odin did anything when it was taken by Shield, then Hydra.

I agree. Plus the MC liked the hood for his original outfit.

So much wasted potential. The story started out good, but then the author just dropped another character in with no thought, and then basically mentally killed the MC.

Also, if he has all the knowledge of Moros/Merlin, wouldn't he know about the communication stones and their connection to the Ori galaxy?