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DMor1yrRespondeu a Nathaniel_Morales_7194This is a celebration - not every celebration needs to be the same, or need to be a 16th century ball among nobles. A pasta made by your mother and shared with neighbors is perhaps a greater and more original celebration than many that have become big events but empty of meaning.
There's a memory of him celebrating his 13th birthday alone present in my mind.- DMor1yrComentou
Bro, there are people who kill the guys they idolize. So killing someone for not liking their story is not so far-fetched
Damn that guy! Who shoots a person just because they don't happen to like your shitty story?! - DMor1yrComentou
We all had thought about physical exercise, but a very specific one
►[Host. Please, cleanse out your dirty notions. I'm referring to physical exercise.] - DMor1yrComentouHe had made a killing this time.
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As long as they don't start calling him Fat Big Dong
The person was naturally his best friend, Dong Wende. - DMor1yrRespondeu a Dionysia
The story is interesting, but a editor is essential for it
In just a few seconds the black Dragon begins to fill the pulling force of the tornado. Even though he was Steel far away from the tornado, he could still feel the pulling force of the tornado. Only then he was able to see clearly what was happening in the distance. Right now a very big tornado was approaching in his direction and everything was getting destroyed in his way. Not only that the moment the dragon spots the tornado he begins to feel danger. You can say that this was his first time feeling like this. - DMor1yrComentou
Or she did not say anything or she did say one thing
Suddenly at this time the communication device of Saint Leo began to ring. Leo instantly became confused because who could contact him in this situation but he still decided to pick up the call. Instantly heard the voice of Mia. She did not say anything and just completely said one thing, she just only told him to get out of his place because a terrifying tornado was approaching their direction. After that sudden call got cut because right now they weren't getting any signal because of the tornado. - DMor1yrRespondeu a DMor
I understand from the context that it should be Alex. What I want to know is who is this Sam who appears in Alex's place from time to time?
But at this time someone is already taking action. As you can guess, it was Sam who was slowly bringing that tornado toward the battlefield. Every monster and everything was aware of the tornado but because it went further away nobody cared about that. But at this time nobody noticed that the power of the tornado had already reached SSS-grade, right now Alex was holding that or you can say controlling that tornado with his all. Right now even for a second if he gets distracted then his control over the tornado will be gone. Controlling a SSS-grade tornado is really tough. You can say that right now in just 1 minute, he was losing all of his Mana. But fortunately he was able to recover them with his potion. - DMor1yrComentou
Sometimes you say Eden Blue, other you say Earth. This is some mistake or they are the two worlds and I'm misunderstanding?
Saint Leo, Saint Amanda, Saint Mia and Saint Simon were from the human side while the other five were from the elves. Right now one else remains in the Eden blue and some S-grade fighters are in the Eden blue. They stay in the Eden blue to watch over the Eden blue. - DMor1yrComentou
we get it, they were familiar with it
You can say that many of those fighters were familiar with the tornado because previously this tornado helped defeat that black Dragon and because of this, many fighters were familiar with the tornado. At this time those other fighters, even though they were confused and at the same time they were surprised, were also trying to search for the person who was doing all of this. - DMor1yrComentou
"don't know why" haw many times bro?
"Hmm… still keep searching. Don't know why but if you second ago I feel familiar with those ants. Don't know why but I had a feeling that he was behind all of this. But I don't know why but right now I am unable to feel his aura." The king of the monster said this to his subordinates. - DMor1yrRespondeu a Small_Otaku
Bro, most of times when you use the expressions "you could say", "well", and "now", you really can just take out it from the phrase and won't make difference. Sometimes we use these expressions while speaking, but using while writting will make the text repetitive, wearing. So, I suggest you try stop using these stuff. Maybe I am making a poor judgment, but I believe your work will show improvement if you read one or two times more before you conclude. Mistakes like misspelled words will lessen. The story is interesting, I hope it continues and always improving.[img=recommend]
- DMor1yrRespondeu a Sepzkie
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