FireBall540

when did Josie die in the novel I thought she was still alive

If you are having writers block, a good method would be to take a step back, reread what you have already done, review your road map for the novel, and even take a breather to read others work to find new inspiration. In my opinion, what you have written so far is great. I always feel like I'm on the edge of my seat, and right, I am more worried about the two kids being able to return home safely

I really like to read more of this web novel when are you going to released more chapters

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

where are the next chapters I can't wait to see what happens next

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

this chapter is telling me that it is not finished

fir some reason this chapter and the second chapter above this are saying that the chapter is not finished

The story has a rich history that supports the background of the world. The characters are all unique, and you just want to see how they will grow as individuals. I love how you integrated the element of the main character having their gender changed, and that leads to them slowly opening up and starting to actually grow. There are some areas that could be improved either with more impactful events or unexpected variables just popping up.