AshenShugar

please ignore the haters, loving the story & would love to see where you take this

I'm so glad I found this story that was a great read, thank you

I still say it should be "you speak draconic"

If you are fatally wounded then you are dead as the wound is "fatal" I would suggest you say "critically" wounded which places the person in a critical condition rather

That was great, him realising that there is more to life than chasing after Dumbledore is a nice way to show him maturing, which also follows nicely with him realising his feelings for Daphne. Great work on that chapter.

I was so expecting an " X gonna give it to ya" moment here [img=recommend]

this was a great story, thank you, I'll definitely check out your other works

*allegiance

see my previous comment *steak

*steak is what you eat stake is used to kill vampires [img=recommend]