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The writing quality is more than decent, updates seem to be frequent, chapter are long and enjoyable, story does not lag, characters seem satisfyingly portraited as of yet.

The Emperor card would also be a good choice, standing for the Black Emperor, representing the opposite of order, chaos and the establishment of the new.

Welcome back ! Hope with the revamping you attract more people. Story is great, exceptionaly interesting. Everyone should give it a try !!!!

it is a very good story. is there any chance we could have the original title, given that the translation has stopped ?

This is a good story to translate. I apply your efforts. There are some things you could try improving, not on vocabulary or grammar or syntax, but on the "flow" of some paragraphs. Otherwise, exceptional. I have read the raw, it is good.

It gladens me that this is your opinion on the so called "Power levels" and Nobility Ranks of the DxD Devils. I, also, believe that Satan-rank is a misnomer, and is actually a title, like King, Duke, etc. In fact, I think that that an extra distinction exists ... STRENGTH-wise, meaning amount of total energy/demonic energy and its quality (if that is the approach a fanfic takes ), the maximun rank a Devil can achieve is peak of the Ultimate class... Thus the name of "Ultimate", otherwise it would be called something else. In my opinion, Super Devils are not stronger energy wise, their stronger ability wise. Sirzechs can trasnform into the atual representation of the concept of Destruction ! It is not his crazy MP bar, not his INT stat that makes him Super, nor is it his battle skills. It is the fact that he can affect beings far beyond his weight class and usually emerge victorius. Same stands for Rizevam or Azukas, they are at the peak of what their species can naturally reach, but the possess abilitites that make them a legit threat to a group( Rizevam, thus his is the "weakest" Super) or generally other beings. I think it goes like a cultivation novel, where one might be X rank and comprehended the Law of ... Idontknow, Fire, where another guy is rank X-1 or X-2 but has comprehended the Law of Causality or Fate or I-dont-give-a-damn. So a Super-class Devil is a Devil that is "Special" in the way it can express its power, thus bypassing any limitations inflicted upon their race and bloodlines .... heck, even Serafal flirts with the concept of being "Super", it is just that her Sitri bloodline ability of manipulating water, mutated into manipulating and creating ice ... If, for example, she unlocked the ability to affect the "flow" of things ( because the water "flows" and thus it would make ... "sense", she would be a bonafide Super devil. She is not, simply because her mutation does not allow her to punch above her weight class, like it does for Sirzechs. So, although I am taking it a step further than you, I will return to the top and, once more, agree that Satan is a title ( nobility rank) and not an actual level of power, although to get that rank, it would be required to possess similar levels of power as the original Satans, thus being eligible for the name. In the train of thought, Serpahims and Archangel Michael are peak Ultimate Class, AT BEST, given that they could't defeat the original Lucifer and his race, even though they hade the elemental advantage ( Holy ) ... Unless we start considering that Holy Beings are as weak in Demonic/Profane energies as the Demonic beings are to holy ( the whole antithesis and stuff).

And I officially picture Alor as a whiteskined and whitehaired Demiurge ... Glasses included [img=recommend]

My immature thoughts exactly

Κοσμικά Μυστικά : Περί διαστάσεων και παράλληλων συμπάντων :p Sry, not speaking ancinent AND forgotten versions of Greek :p

This story is amazing ! Although the concept of starting with no powers and slowly accumulate them is not something new for the marvel genre, is is handled properly and with care, leading to an interesting protagonist but a more interesting story ! A must read !