They’re the Greek gods, patience isn’t cultivated if they get everything they want

I rmr reading that and I was like this kid ain’t serious tryna do allat

Running it back is crazyyy

2nd chap is out I just read it

I like it, you outdone yourself

I appreciate all the support and I thank you all for the kindness.

Yea not to that point but there are people much worse just not to the point of making the joker a saint

Says he was ex military and trained in martial arts for years. I would say it’s a exaggeration that he can face widow with just that but we don’t know his past so???

Foreshadowing??? Or just a random thought?

I actually like the way he monologues to himself. Its a pretty funny add-on that fleshes him out pretty well

The quality is pretty good for a first time author, the updating stab is something to be improved upon for sure but I would rather have sporadic updates then a dropping of the story. It has good potential, main character isn’t an idiot, he is fleshed out and has a personality beyond of just amassing power and grabbing any girl he wants. He is cold, methodical, ruthless, coupled with compassion for children. Reminds me of Aizen without the world-ending ambition and a slight care for other human beings. It is a unique start by telling us the ending, which in my opinion is kind of killing the story a little because of the knowledge that no matter what happens, he’s going to survive. However, who knows maybe the author can pull it off to be something interesting. There haven’t been enough side characters to say that they have been fleshed out well. But with the few characters that have come on and had a dialogue, they seem like real people and not NPC’s. Romance: There hasn’t been a mentioning of a girl character without it being from using them in a plan yet. The author did say that he has around 3 girls in mind from genshin, which I find momentously weird because of how large the verse is and the fact that it’s still expanding. However, I understand that the more girls there are, the less real the romance can become. It can also become a testament to the authors writing ability if he can pull it off well. Overall, I like it. Keep up the good work and don’t suffer the author illness of making the main character a complete idiot and make them do something completely out of character for plot after 20 chapters

Nah

Everything is wrong with that

Bro what I didn’ even know he was black; I don’ have anyyhing against it but since when

F

Whens the next chap; you got me fixated

Hes gay???

Not rlly; The charisma/ battle IQ ash possesed was virtually unrivaled in the pokemon world of couRse if he was a little calmer and level headed and trained his pokemon more techinically he would have been unbeatable unless it was Legendaries or Tobias. if ash winning his battles was plot armor then all the times he lost was also plot because we are talking about A pikachu that was able to battle and hold Off armies of pokemon and summin thunderbolts to even injure legendaries that were literal Gods of creation losing to a snivy. if they didnt reseT his personality to his 10 year old self everytime a new series was made then he would have been pokemon master by end of Season 6 hoenn. The writers milked the whole journey thing too much and they made whoever was popular enough/ whoever they wanted to win beat him

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Imagine the african american boxer was Mike tyson