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who dafuq pays to join the military shouldn't be the other way around?!? Marine combat vet here... you get paid to attend ocs officer candidate school
I feel like it's been a hundred chapters and he hasn't learned the first simple spell
just curious as to why 10000 people are need to farm an area a third of a mile if they are supposed to be stronger than the average human? can 10000 people even fit on such a small plot of land? if it takes 4 laps around the average high school field track to make a mile and 100 hectares is - .38 of a mile that means it's slightly bigger than the average high school football field......
why all the non commissioned officers? seems like alot of chiefs but not that many "Indians"
that's a weird onamonapia to use why not "Wapah Wapah skadooooshhh"🤣🤣🤣
whole heartedly agree to many stories with plot holes
this must be china thinking
lemme guess... somewhere in the seven realms maybe?
it's his nindo his ninja way
getting close to dropping this
doesn't this guy have level 2 in metallurgy? shouldn't he be better than the bot?
it seems to that the money in the republic has no real value unless each credit is equivalent to a penny how tf is anything $500m's the only thing I can think of is that bright credits were literally printed out with out anything backing it (like the us dollar is supposedly back by gold) which drove inflation through the effing roof
Does he offer medical insurance or 401k
damn this was a very good read up until this point😤😤😤 if he doesn't get smarter soon... I'm dropping it
Finish Him dun dun dun FATALITY
I really like the plot. These kind of stories just so happens to be my cup of tea. its just hard to read. The obvious grammatical errors can be overlooked but for me, it's the flow of the story that bothers me. The story seems either rushed or forced in just the first chapter. my advice; slow it down a little some to describe the settings or wut the characters look, but keep up the good work 👍👍 if you keep writing I'll keep reading.
I'm getting book of eli vibes 🤣🤣🤣
yes... yes I would
y does a private (the lowest possible military rank) have access to someone personal files
yeah that'll teach them 🤣🤣🤣