RagingDrake
A guy with questionable sanity who likes reading. I wanna know how different and unique the stories can become from canon.
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RagingDrake55minComentouBro!
"Ken" replied with a serious face Morax, looking directly at Kenshin's surprised face. "In honour of the man who gave us this chance, and made this miracle possible."- RagingDrake5hComentou
Gundam time!
But of course, you are also able to make actual magitech, using the strengths of both fields to negate their weaknesses and make something surpassing what you could do just using one of them. Whether it is space ships powered by magic and enchanted to be far sturdier and more powerful than their material makeup would suggest, ships powered by white holes that are contained through magic, warp gates allowing for unmolested travel throughout the galaxy once they are set up, or bombs that break open rifts to subspace, capable of easily scorching a planet through mana acting like antimatter rushing out of them, there's no technology to be found in Neolife that is beyond your ability to create. - RagingDrake21hRespondeu a Herohero
I did, and so far the world building has expanded and more ideas are implemented which is good, the latest chapters have been an improvement The thing I’m looking forward to your improvement tho is in character interactions and situations, so far there hasn’t been any lengthy conversations between any of the characters yet (feels too short for any characterization) and the downtime between plot points like characters hanging out and defining their specific quirks and personalities
"No, Mabel, I have an appointment today, even if the people involved don't know it yet," I said, finishing my bowl of cereal bought with my own money, since Stan Pines is too stingy to buy me any. - RagingDrake21hRespondeu a Miami_XM
He can apparently manipulate his body so I’m just gonna assume he looks normal when he meets them
I can proudly say that I am currently more accomplished than Vegapunk himself, and I'm only 12 years old biologically. - RagingDrake21hComentou
So he gonna become normal when he gets out?
- Body Manipulation: The nanomachines can be used to more effectively control your body and do things theoretically impossible for a human. - RagingDrake22hComentou
Now how tf is he planning on hiding this (is he even gonna try to hide it?)
He seemed to be 15 or 16 years old, and without boasting too much, I can say that I'm quite well-built compared to people like Robbie or Soos. - RagingDrake22hComentou
Just a bit more work on character building and interactions
Currently, the master is busy with the "Seraphim" project, he entrusted me to use the extra money to invest in different markets and create the foundations of the SCP foundation. - RagingDrake22hComentou
World building is improving!
Currently, the master is busy with the "Seraphim" project, he entrusted me to use the extra money to invest in different markets and create the foundations of the SCP foundation. - RagingDrake22hComentou
Smart decision!
"I should probably avoid wearing that thing with the FBI around," I told myself mentally as I hid the amulet. - RagingDrake22hComentou
And dipper is currently wearing a certain necklace that belonged to him
"The reason for our presence at your home is to investigate the tragic death of the Gleeful family," he explained, looking me straight in the eye. - RagingDrake22hRespondeu a oppaidaisuke_69
It’s been 2 months, how has this not been shadow banned lol
Author's Note: Yes, this chapter has no major events, but it is necessary to clarify things between Dipper and Pacifica. - RagingDrake22hComentou
She tethers between a line of confidence and stupidity
After all, she has faced dimensional demons and other supernatural creatures without being mentally defeated in a definitive way. - RagingDrake22hComentou
Finally a pov change!
Mabel's POV - RagingDrake23hComentou
There's basically no sibling connection at all in this story, even mabel isn't dumb enough to NOT notice her brother's change and it isn't even subtle, just a complete 180 and they barely hang out at all, there also isn't any of the gravity falls charm present within the story like mystery, twists, fun character interactions! It just seems like a typical SI story where mc takes advantage of everything and ignores everyone and everything else with the side-characters being mostly 2-dimensional Hopefully it improves as it goes on
"No, Mabel, I have an appointment today, even if the people involved don't know it yet," I said, finishing my bowl of cereal bought with my own money, since Stan Pines is too stingy to buy me any. - RagingDrake23hComentou
really relating to her, reflecting the dynamic between stan and ford
Surprisingly, seeing her make that face managed to touch the little kindness I had left, which frankly surprised me. - RagingDrake23hComentou"Hehe…. I'm in danger."
- RagingDrake23hComentou
Time shenanigans
"Chloe? Yeah, she's one of Shizue's students. She's an expert in using magic." Ifrit answered, casually picking up all of the garbage that Veldora had thrown across the room. - RagingDrake23hComentou
You should first watch normal Sao to truly appreciate how great it is! A better love story than twilight is the masterpiece!
"Bwuahahahahahaaha, this is why I like you, kid. You're the best lackey to ever live. Now, come on, I wanna learn what happens here. This SAO abridged is truly a magnificent work of art. Make me some popcorn." He shouted with a bright smile, yet just as he was about to relax, he felt a chill in his spine. - RagingDrake23hComentou
Does she lay eggs or…?
Dear Journal, you must be wondering how my bro is doing… Well, he married a pigeon or something. That doesn't matter. What really matters is how totally awesome and cool I am. - RagingDrake23hComentouDear Journal, my bro just beat up a big Orc. Kinda neat. He ate him up like a Reese's Puff. But dear Journal, you won't believe the audacity of this bitch.