TheStormCommando

Glad to have you back! Hope you find the rewrite and new books to be even more enjoyable!

Thank you very much for your review. They may not be common, but when I do get them, they mean the world to me and inspire me to keep on writing, so thank you very much!

Definitely an unreliable narrator. Information is limited and there are also, of course, the impacts of propaganda.

To you as well! And Happy New Year!

To you as well!

I sadly cannot see which paragraph you were commenting on, but one thing I try to employ a lot of is the unreliable narrator. Sometimes, it will be due to bias, and other times, due to lack of information, just like what you were saying. "The brainwashing and distortion of facts."

Frankly, I have to agree with you on many points. A lot of things from the first book will be relevant later in ways that would be spoilers to say, but notwithstanding, I already am rewriting this first book. It will still be the same setting and such, but I plan on making it a lot more interesting. To tell you the truth, I really appreciate this review. It feels the most honest and constructive. I have an AO3 account where I am currently working on a rewritten version since this is 5 year old work back from when I was a Highschool Freshman. Notwithstanding, I appreciate the honesty, but I still hope you stick around. It's good to have honest people reviewing my work.

Hello There! Really glad to see that you enjoyed it. It's review like this that make my day and constantly just give me that extra motivation to keep on writing. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the series, and I look forward to seeing your thoughts on what comes after.

No worries. Glad to see you back!

Well, you're just going to have to wait and see. :)