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vorlefan

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Check out my first novel, Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds: https://www.webnovel.com/book/traveller's-will_25553012106498105

2018-12-28 UnidoBrazil
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4.9h

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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan2d
    Respondeu a Sithaari

    What a good review!

    The First Legendary Beast Master
    Fantasia · Aoki_Aku
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan2d
    Respondeu a Jeanne_Maia

    Um brasileiro com bom gosto por aqui xD

    Shadow Slave
    Fantasia · Guiltythree
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan2d
    Respondeu a R4GE

    What a good review!

    MMORPG: Rebirth of the Shadow Mage
    Fantasia · Gurdon
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan3d
    Respondeu a Paul_Okito

    thank you

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds
    Fantasia · vorlefan
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan3d
    Postado

    This novel is new and for that, my review is more a incentive than criticism about the story itself. It has points it needs a few touch to improve, like the writing quality, but it has potential. I like the scenario that resembles a mix of steampunk and that movie Wall-E. Going to return later for a better review. Give it a try, you may like it.

    The Lost Civilization; I Was Reborn With Advanced Cultivation
    Ficção Científica · Paul_Okito
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan3d
    Comentou

    Interesting start!

    Ch 1 Machine City
    The Lost Civilization; I Was Reborn With Advanced Cultivation
    Ficção Científica · Paul_Okito
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan3d
    Comentou

    good fighting!

    Ch 16 Savage Clash
    The Descent of the Conqueror
    Fantasia · CcSupremecC
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan3d
    Comentou

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 8  The Gray city of Silverguard
    The Clock work codex
    Fantasia · Zenith_Seraph
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan4d
    Respondeu a ImmortalClown

    Thanks for the review :)

    Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds
    Fantasia · vorlefan
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan4d
    Postado

    If you enjoy novel like Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, then you definitely going to like this one, since the author itself is a fan of ORV, and the novel contains references for the novel and other novels too. The only thing I hope the author could improve in the next chapters and even edit the previous one, is the writing quality, since it has some grammar errors. With best regards, vorlefan.

    Dream Abyss
    Urbano · ImmortalClown
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan6d
    Respondeu a Ash_Monarch

    Thanks!

    Ch 23 Asdras Awakening (I)
    Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds
    Fantasia · vorlefan
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan6d
    Respondeu a Ash_Monarch

    thanks xD

    Ch 1 Prologue
    Traveler's Will: Chronicles of the Lost Worlds
    Fantasia · vorlefan
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan6d
    Comentou

    Interesting start and so much references! I'm eager to read more

    Ch 1 Episode 1 – The Beginning of the End (1)
    Dream Abyss
    Urbano · ImmortalClown
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan6d
    Comentou

    My man is a fellow one xD

    Este número foi suprimido.
    Dream Abyss
    Urbano · ImmortalClown
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan6d
    Postado

    It has the potential to be a interesting story to read! It has a clever MC and a interesting backstory and it seems that the concept of good and evil isn't hard defined, meaning it depends of the winner side of story. Give it a try if you enjoy this kind of story!

    The Inner Odyssey
    Fantasia · Ash_Monarch
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan7d
    Comentou

    Nice build up of interactions

    Ch 7 Lost and Found
    The Clock work codex
    Fantasia · Zenith_Seraph
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan7d
    Comentou

    Oh, becoming chaotic, I like it xD

    Ch 6 Inner World
    The Inner Odyssey
    Fantasia · Ash_Monarch
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan7d
    Comentou

    My man is happy xD

    Ch 5 [???]
    The Inner Odyssey
    Fantasia · Ash_Monarch
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan7d
    Comentou

    It is becoming interesting!

    Ch 4 Ignia
    The Inner Odyssey
    Fantasia · Ash_Monarch
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  • vorlefan
    vorlefan7d
    Comentou

    Rollecoster of emotion xD I like it

    Ch 1 Separated
    The Inner Odyssey
    Fantasia · Ash_Monarch
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