I like doing novels on underrated fictional stories.
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It's a pretty good story but one thing that kind of irks me is that the transmigration aspect is just about forgotten about the first few chapters and is never mentioned again. I understand wishing for characters to move past that, but I feel like this story could've done without the isekai aspect and it wouldn't have even changed anything. Overall, pretty damn good, the grammar is on point, the dialogue is snappy, and the characters are alright. Would've liked better paragraphs pertaining to the description of certain scenes, outfits, and such. It can sometimes feel a little bare.
Todo woke up and chose to spit facts!
What a coincidence.
I'm waiting for the "Sometimes... my genius... it's almost frightening."
my favourite fun deck, its so simple and you brick a lot, but damn when you pull that shit off its fun as hell
Not quite how it happened, but hey, if you can make it more interesting than just Cyn accidentally dropping a black hole, I'm all for it.
mid.
Kinda sad nobody had yet used an actual real-life warship in a One Piece fanfiction, even an old design like this would be really cool, plus add in some One Piece shenanigans and it might just become the stuff of legends
underrated