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I reckon the author is writing using an artificial intelligence. That is why words are weirdly looping on the precision part of the OC’s actions. That also may explain how anything lack a description, conversations and we have nothing but actions (fight/training). Characters are unidimensional not because he cannot write them approximately like in canon, but because the AI cannot be creative. It is not as if I can confirm my thoughts tho, and the author obviously write some things himself but the amount of unnecessary italic words per example is no human work. That’s also why the strength of character are weirdly inconsistent, Jonins are supposedly hundred of times stronger but here he can « beat » them ? Anyway, it is still a pleasant book if you want to disconnect your brain. Otherwise, just another wish fulfillment system fan fiction.

I can’t believe the author is from the US. I knew the educational system there was not the best but it truly is tragic.

I have to congratulate you. You are single handedly able to bring down the global IQ by several hundreds points. Your reasoning as wobbly and childish as your sentences are the evidences that you probably do not have the intellectual capacities to actually comprehend that you are wrong. It is both sad and pathetic.

There’s literally a chapter entitled “dropped”. You want me to tattoo it on my face or something similar?

That’s one of the dumbest thing I heard in a while.

Heureux de voir un autre auteur français sur la plateforme. Continue de faire de ton mieux, c’est ça qui importe.

Understandable.

Giving an occasion to AFO to steal the mc’s quirk would mean weakening Kotei for no reason. Beside, I don’t see the usefulness of this scene. By the way our mc’s quirks can be stolen like everyone else.

This is a nice first chapter, it is far better than the average novels you see around. I can tell that you worked very seriously on this one, the potential of the book is enormous. I don't have a lot of things to comment on since it is just the beginning, but I am rooting for you. Don't forget to write for yourself and not for the readers. Otherwise, you will fast find writing boring. Keep on with the top-tier quality.

Why? This scene will literally make no sense and will feel forced as f.