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RainbowBeheader12dRespondeu a goshathat happens in a pro football too... i would complain, but that doesnt make it good reading complaints several times
He wasn't anyone's babysitter and was already hard-carrying this team enough as it was so he didn't feel the need to over-stress himself any further to motivate the team especially when he had warned them before coming into the second half to focus more on defense, but they had ignored him.- RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a XenoCantSee
mc complains even more lol
He wasn't anyone's babysitter and was already hard-carrying this team enough as it was so he didn't feel the need to over-stress himself any further to motivate the team especially when he had warned them before coming into the second half to focus more on defense, but they had ignored him. - RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a Sphire1707
idk if they are used later, but i have read some novels that were good and 1 that was amazing, except all of them used anime/films/books references in them, when they could have done the same without mentioning it, and it distracted from reading their original at first, later it was annoying and most of them were dropped
"... James Bond, Bruce Wayne, and Jason Bolu," After calling eleven names, Luke finally stopped calling names. - RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a GifflarGod
paranoia?
He was merely being polite by smiling and responding as if he was surprised and enlightened, while in reality, he couldn't give a flying fuck about anybody's suspicions. - RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a BrucePickEmUp"Soccer boots, check,"
- RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a Sphire1707
gj with this. Writing webnovels is difficult and you need to hook readers, slow start when reborn mc is better than kids is done in sports novels, fantasy, scifi and even female novels. If you look around there is pretty good chance that there are tens of football novels that went on hiatus with still kid mc....
Since then, it had been eleven years and finally, he couldn't hold in the urge to not play on a big field with a crowd. - RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a rathan
yo what, just this?
I ran and ran, making my way towards the coach in a bid to borrow his phone and tell them not to come, but immediately I saw the coach on the phone with someone and looking at me with a pitiful look on his face, I knew I had failed. - RainbowBeheader1mthRespondeu a Sphire1707
- RainbowBeheader2mthRespondeu a LLagier
and what you wrote continued
Lu Yan stopped her gesture for a short moment to consider the credibility of the dying young woman's words. But she dismissed her uncertainties without hesitation. Whether Miya was telling the truth or not was of no importance. Whoever tried to kill her deserved to die. - RainbowBeheader2mthRespondeu a
i dropped it, bcs the story went nowhere. Those two fkers that went after mc? survived way too long. long story arcs
Lu Yan stopped her gesture for a short moment to consider the credibility of the dying young woman's words. But she dismissed her uncertainties without hesitation. Whether Miya was telling the truth or not was of no importance. Whoever tried to kill her deserved to die. - RainbowBeheader2mthRespondeu a Jagoda_Anusiewicz
i have read too many mage/xianxia/wuxia novels where they shout names of their techniques, even if they dont need to say anything. Cherry in this have assasins obviously
"Cloak my sword in rapid water… Water Edge!" A young masculine voice cried out. - RainbowBeheader2mthRespondeu a LLagier
i do not read this anymore. But, wasnt she some kind of super talent? if so, people like this will make a splash, even if they are in army or private force
Lu Yan stopped her gesture for a short moment to consider the credibility of the dying young woman's words. But she dismissed her uncertainties without hesitation. Whether Miya was telling the truth or not was of no importance. Whoever tried to kill her deserved to die. - RainbowBeheader4mthRespondeu a CaracasM
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