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Yabadabadu

Yabadabadu

Lv4
2018-11-22 UnidoGlobal
350.2h

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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Postado

    The Raw title:- 数据修炼系统 This one is already complete.

    Data Cultivation System
    Jogos · The Single-winged
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Postado

    Raw title:- 我怎么会成了反派跟班 or How did I become the villain's follower?

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Postado

    Raw:- 长生从娶妻开始 OR Longevity begins with marrying a wife

    Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife
    Oriental · Cucumber Lover
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Respondeu a Furkan_The_Newbie

    Well after chapter 24 it's a downhill journey, I read the raw novel in google translation as far as chapter 100, and my god it kept getting worse, so I dropped it. P.S- This one did become Radioactive fallout

    I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency
    Oriental · Flying Fatty
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Respondeu a MoreMercury76

    If this is trash then the rest of the trial read is radioactive fallout.

    I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency
    Oriental · Flying Fatty
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Postado

    This novel is just about okay as a concept, but I'm not particularly sure that this one would improve the further it goes. And if it improves in the future chapters, it could be a good read, as long as it doesn't become a dumpster fire. At the very least this is marginally better than the rest of the trial reads.

    I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency
    Oriental · Flying Fatty
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Respondeu a Manjuan

    I mean it is average but not bad enough to be a dumpster fire.

    I Hide And Farm In The World Of Cultivation To Increase My Proficiency
    Oriental · Flying Fatty
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Respondeu a Yabadabadu

    Even in such a short review, which you can't even call a proper review I made a spelling mistake. *give.

    Level up, Slay Monsters, And Collect Equipment Everyday
    Urbano · Late Comer
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu1yr
    Postado

    Someone in the reviews posted about this novel that it has been "allegedly" plagiarized, but what I have read in the available chapters provided me with some hope, that this one is not like one of those abysmally plagiarized novel. So I gove this one my approval.

    Level up, Slay Monsters, And Collect Equipment Everyday
    Urbano · Late Comer
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    "what are your intensions"i mean they are guards not receptionists.

    "Halt, may we know your intentions for entering the town?"
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou
    'Up and down,' Khan thought as his concentration intensified, 'Left and right, and circles in the end. I need to do it without losing control over the mana before moving to a harsher exercise.'
    Chaos' Heir
    Fantasia · Eveofchaos
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    youuu what sorcery is this.

    What laid before my eyes was not Robin, or so what I thought he would look like. He has short black hair, a pretty face that would bring shame to any prince you would encounter—not that I have met any, and the very same sharp pale gold eyes that I saw through his visor. So far, so good. Then as my eyes fall to his body—or well, her body it is like my mind went floated away, confused.
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    oooohh backstory, we'll be getting some spicy backstory.

    "...never again."
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Postado

    At present I feel this work has good grammer and exceptional writing, considering the pool of subpar novels i have seen on this platform. Worldbuilding: Nicely done with subtle introduction of information in a well paced manner, that is what i take from it, do keep in mind i have only read 8 chapters but these 8 were enough to hook me to my phone to ask for more. To the Author, Write this story at your own pace and do not force yourself.

    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    Well right now at present, I really did not see that coming. I mean when Thane used the weaken spell to save Robin, I did feel that he should have noticed. Once an accident, twice a coincidence but three times now that's a pattern.

    Ch 8 Chapter 7: Hopeful to see the world
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    I really had no idea where to go

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    Just how isolated were you...

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    We didn't expect a hero

    "Geez, you don't have to worry about that. Just do what you're best at. We don't expect a hero when we accepted you, everybody here is just a man doing their best."
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    Or you can say"it dawned upon me that I am gonna take on a big responsibility"

    "I'm quite nervous if I am going to be honest, it dawned of me that I am gonna take a big responsibility."
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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  • Yabadabadu
    Yabadabadu2yr
    Comentou

    it dawned on me

    "I'm quite nervous if I am going to be honest, it dawned of me that I am gonna take a big responsibility."
    The Lightbringer Necromancer
    Fantasia · Snowtrick
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