FallenZyphl

I don't want to say this but why does some of the description looks like it's been generated by chatgpt....

I know. I'm just saying it for the sake if ranting. Plus any comment that's not negative is considered a comment in an author's book. I'm just tired of many going with the logic if powerful creatures becoming more human-like the stronger they become. like a baby dragon is a giant lizard while the most powerful dragon is ni different from a human except their powers.

I'm waiting for you to return~ waiting for your return~

貓山王 mao shan wang

"he has" or "he did" would've been better here in my opinion. "he is" sounds kinda weird.

really? i thought they were too busy going around covering up "accidents" from using poor building materials that caused thousands of lives each year, shutting up the civilians' voices asking for justice, and denouncing the world because they want to brainwash the people so much to the point they're like the KKK

how is not being a human bad news? why does it have to be human? is this racisms? what is wrong with goblins and slimes? ever seen re:monster or tensura? they are stronger than any human in their world? why are humans the superior race? human supremacy is just clouds of lies before the eyes of the weak! I'm thinking of something else to write but nothing comes to mind! rawr!

how old do you think she is? and yes, I would still hate them but I wouldn't purposely do anything to them. just because it's logical doesn't mean an emotional person at that situation will think logically. in a child/teen's (even some adults') mind, it doesn't matter if you're the actual cause of their suffering, it's the fact that you're part of it.

People need to let out their anger one way or another. The dad died because he went to fetch MC. So it's normal for the sister to feel it was the brother's fault their dad died. Even if he never asked the dad to do it.

from here on, the things are what happened in the past so use past tense.