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Shouldn’t the burned ones attack on sight though??

It would have been a nice read, but the grammer is absolutely horrendous. As much as I wanted to continue giving it a try I couldn’t. At chapter 12 I gave up as the grammer finally hit the unreadable level sadly.

Romance yes harem no

Uhm, a five star because every other author does it but that is besides the point. I am writing this to kind of address this novel and what exactly is happening. This was a novel started by my younger self and never-finished. It had decent planning, for my younger self back then, and after taking a look at it I decided to dedicate a bit of time to it. However, it is currently in a very work-in-progress state where I'm trying to see where my younger self was heading and not exactly agreeing. Which gets us here! I decided to focus on Slice-Of-Life unlike my younger self who wanted adventure. Yet, this novel can very easily be moved to be an adventure novel and I am adding certain aspects to chapters to ensure that when Volume 1 is finished, Volume 2 can have a different feeling with the novel moving into a more adventure state. However! I honestly don't mind where this novel goes so I leave it up to anyone who is reading this and wishes to state their thoughts. I'm quite set on slice-of-life for volume one but can anything past that I have no vision. So, if you would like to contribute with ideas, leave comments on what I should include, improve at, remove, edit, etc feel free to do so! Most importantly, this is a side-project I am doing for fun. I will never contract it so don't worry about have to pay to unlock chapters.

I mean bashfulness kinda slaps at some moments but that isn’t the plan, wouldn’t fit the char as he was raised as a heir

There will be 1 chapter daily for 30 days. Big things ahead for Ryo, dudes kinda a legend. You all should stick around just wait until the hot female lead appears. No harem tho thats weird.

Also Elf God is a crappy title

Seen it, at the same time I’m now much much further into my English degree and reading my old writing makes me cringe, I could continue this but I’ll be honest this is far to rush, not enough details, not enough explaining, nothing. I mean in chapter 2 it seems like I planning to introduce a female lead? Absolute rubbish from my prospective now. I also should have started the novel at the village being invaded. Kie is also a crappy name for a elf… while I’m at it might as well mention I can’t find any documents regarding novel on my pc, making me think I didn’t plan it… However, instead of continuing this I might start fresh instead. Similar path, but much better pacing and I’ll plan a world behind everything.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola