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JeSsY93

JeSsY93

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2018-11-03 UnidoGlobal
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY934mth
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    I like it but It could be a bit boring for some people if it stays like this. Create a book where he gets it by coincidence which has the most modern information about Britain Wizard World especially about the school where he can make an improvement on it's curriculum in the future for example; have a guardian that has his best interest in mind where he can give him better guidance in the wizard world and is not influenced with the " Dark and Light families"; develop a good relationship with the globins where they support him in his endeavors like his future sells of products for example, have one good goblin thinker guide him too and tutors that he can hire through them. With this, you could make him more aware and have guidelines to his self improvement. Thankyou for the good work till now.

    Ch 19 Ambitions
    Harry Potter: No More Simping
    Livros e literatura · Mystic_Verse
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    The most ironic thing that could happen is if what she says is true😏

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    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime e quadrinhos · SolaceViolet
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY938mth
    Respondeu a po_yang

    Where please ?

    The Formidable Lady of the Poor Scholar's Household
    História · Graceful Devotion
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    Can they not see the memories of the dead and the ones that are still alive ? 🤔

    Just as he was about to stab me with Kunai, he was entangled by the chains on the ground, and it just so happened to hit the pincers and cut open his face.
    Reborn in Konoha as the Anbu Torturer
    Anime e quadrinhos · nyawdao2
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    JeSsY9310mth
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    I am liking this Percy more. Lets see how it goes

    "Do you remember what happened today, ten years ago?" Percy asked him, evenly.
    Imagination - HP
    Livros e literatura · burnable
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9310mth
    Respondeu a sh1_22

    I had a problem searching it with what you gave but I found out the raw with different name

    Reborned as an Orphan Girl With a Spatial Pocket!
    Geral · Lu Huahua
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9310mth
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    the player? 🤔

    "First, if you die in the doomsdy world, thealayer will note able to return to the real world!"
    I Became Super Rich In The Post-Apocalyptic world
    Urbano · Vishwajeet_raj
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    JeSsY9310mth
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    Throught 🤔

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    I Became Super Rich In The Post-Apocalyptic world
    Urbano · Vishwajeet_raj
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9310mth
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    Yes

    Yes
    Isekai in Harry Potter (AU)
    Filmes · imperial_demon
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9310mth
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    Yes

    Yes
    Isekai in Harry Potter (AU)
    Filmes · imperial_demon
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9310mth
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    No

    No
    Isekai in Harry Potter (AU)
    Filmes · imperial_demon
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY9311mth
    Respondeu a Morscribe

    I would like at least he made 3 more friends. Maybe 2 of them could be lily and Snape so that he could change the fact that they stopped being friends. I don't care that you could change the part where lily and James came to be together but it would be nice with another perspective when lily and Snape are still friends and the Mc helps the misunderstanding between them. Make him know faster of the problems in the magic society and make him think on how to protect himself from harm. Maybe develop a part where he is protected without his knowledge with his family that he doesn't know of yet. He should be protected somehow because of Dumbledore ideals. I am kinda excited and curious to know what will happen when he has access to the ROR. You could give him certain permissions within the castle without Dumbledore know, since it's connect to who we know. One of those permissions can be to know all the castle pathways and whole system and update it along the years with his knowledge of both magical e muggle worlds. Great story btw [img=update]

    Felix Scarletwound: The Transfiguration Prodigy
    Livros e literatura · Morscribe
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY931yr
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    I really liked the story but it left me with wanting more of it. It has so much potencial when you develop further. I felt that it is unfinished. Thank you btw[img=update][img=recommend]

    A Hogwarts Fanfic of George Weasley and Lily Snow
    Fantasia · Aqua_Larxene
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY931yr
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    I'm liking the story so far but I think that there should be improvement in the system. Like giving him personal bonus skills with each improvement to the academy, also you could give Roderick skills that he had before transmigrating so that he could work it to understand magic. The fact that Thane and Elara got together while he was in coma and from what I understood Roderick had a bad part in his relationship with Elara, those 2 should never had done this like It should be. Because after they revealed that they (T&E) were together because of the conversation between both o them and with Roderick, I felt like if he didn't agree with them been together, that they could done something harmful to Roderick 🤔 like betraying him.. I dunno about this but maybe after reading more chapter I can understand why I'm feeling like this. Keep up with the good work BTW 😁

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Learning Environment
    Reborn With The Magical Academy System
    Fantasia · Mitico
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  • JeSsY93
    JeSsY931yr
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    Erwin? 🤔

    Host: Alvin Gaunt
    Hogwarts: The Way of the Dharma (Harry Potter)
    Livros e literatura · Big_Big_0235
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