gingertabby

having povs is such a waste. scenes happenings in the previous chapter will be repeated on the next chapter. this happens many times

this is Avatar with bending techniques. haha

what an idiotic scene

A whiner. Just kill yourself since you hate your life. Stop acting like the world owe you everything. You just a shit, act like one.

what a stupid way to use instant transmission

whats a useless mc. bery strong bit a coward。shame for the saiyan race. cant even revenge hia mother. whats the use of being strong if cant protect your love ones. sigh. i said too much. i think the author is not smart enough to think of revenge.

so mc needs an army to defeat freeza? in the end he needs to hug the thighs of the protagonist. so whats the use of the system then?ancient bloodline? as depicted mc likes to train and enjoys life much. eating,shitting and sleeping. wake up then eat then brushing teeth. when he perspired he take a bath with shampoo. before sleep he will watch movie. so mc needs to lick peoples ass to defeat freeza

to answer your question sakura is okay but the story itself is bad. imagine mcs mother scare a hokage who is ninja god by a stare? thats ridiculous itself. the way your mc presents itself is a useless bum who cant decide for herself just lile a typical idiot. your chapter are very short, i guess uou did this to make many chapters. just look at the rating, its one of the lowest here. its shows that this story is bad. i doubt those give high ratin to your story are family, friends and neighbors

i forgot your the author of this shit just suck, your own dick. if your brain is not enough to improve your work use your dick. it will work

quick question. are you sucking authors dick? if not mind your own business