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SteveOl

SteveOl

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2018-10-23 UnidoPeru
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl1mth
    Comentou

    Will you introduce elements from TDG?

    Ch 69 I have returned from work
    Against The Demons and Gods With My Beautiful Wives
    Anime e quadrinhos · DizzMe
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl2mth
    Respondeu a Hemanth_Chandra

    You have commented a lot, thank you :D

    It was just the usual conversation between two senile friends.
    Naruto: Secret organization
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl2mth
    Respondeu a Hemanth_Chandra

    Jejeje Just wait.

    Unfortunately, real life is not like the fanfic you read, where the reincarnated person, just because they exist, becomes special and their fate cannot be predicted. From the moment you enter this world you become part of it. You cannot simply fight what can be considered the will of the whole world.
    Naruto: Secret organization
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl3mth
    Respondeu a GoldZero

    Yeah, I didn't know how to balance at that time.

    The book was quite old, from more than 300 years ago, which is not surprising, even in this day and age you still read things like "the art of war", which is already thousands of years old. What is surprising is that a comic, or manga, is read even in these times, even if only for a niche, which speaks volumes about how famous it was.
    Naruto: Secret organization
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl3mth
    Comentou

    Too mediocre

    Ch 80 Chapter 80 I'm back
    DxD: I got Isekai’d In Ecchi girls World
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    I think it's best to concentrate on the current one. Otherwise, with the little time you have to write, you may leave everyone dissatisfied.

    Este livro foi excluído.
  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Postado

    Too many falshbacks, It breaks the pace of the story. It's better to advance the story and create a special arc to tell the past of the prota.

    Naruto: My Harem Academia
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Please new chapter!

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 Gift to Xiao Xun'er
    Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di
    Anime e quadrinhos · Trinity189
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Thanks! I'm waiting for today's chapter! :D

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 Gift to Xiao Xun'er
    Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di
    Anime e quadrinhos · Trinity189
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Thanks and pls update, I like this a lot!

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 Xiao Yan getting Beaten
    Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di
    Anime e quadrinhos · Trinity189
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Thanks!

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 Dig Out Your Old Man!!
    Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di
    Anime e quadrinhos · Trinity189
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Why is there no chapter today?

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 Is Alchemy King Powerfull?
    Duo Po: My Daughter Descended, Boasting of me as the Dou Di
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    It was interesting...WAS

    Ch 71 Chapter 70 : Second Place
    Ninja World Gold List: Uchiha Was Exposed At The Start
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Postado

    First, the story follows the canon, but nothing new exists. But the most important thing is that he is just too stupid, at the start he said he had no money, but then he can make gunpowder, so just selling that formula to anyone could have earned him a fortune. Also, he fights with the little fairy doctor, but just by having a good relationship with her he could have earned much more, after all, she is not an alchemist. So I don't recommend this.

    BTTH: from Dou Disciple to Dou God
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    I don't know what to think about the protagonist. Why did he suddenly went retard? There's nothing in that cave that is absolutely necessary for his strength, even the flying technique can not be said to be indispensable. As for the map, if he forms a good relationship with her, she's going to give it to him, after all, she's not an alquemist. Finally, did he become so stupid to forget that she's the only one who can take him to the hidden forest?

    Ch 8 Finding the Cave
    BTTH: from Dou Disciple to Dou God
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Comentou

    Thanks, it was good.

    Ch 191 Another story
    In MHA with Star Platinum
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl4mth
    Postado

    Too rushed, I can't enjoy anything. Also, it's too centered around the protagonist and too many details are left out. On the other hand, the relationship with the girl is too superficial.

    MHA Stand User
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl5mth
    Postado

    A piece of &@ _;'?$/$:"-!The relationships are bad, the timing is bad, the protagonist is too broken.

    Fairy Tail: Djinn Take Over [COMPLETED]
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl5mth
    Respondeu a waydown

    It would be too easy.

    Ch 22 Chapter 22: From Now On (Vol 1 END)
    Naruto: Secret organization
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  • SteveOl
    SteveOl5mth
    Comentou

    Just continue like until now.

    Ch 69 Question
    Danmachi: Divine Enemy
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