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Xedeenzzid

Xedeenzzid

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2018-10-11 UnidoGlobal
9.2h

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    Xedeenzzid4 years ago
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    I like the plot but the writing quality meh(the words that the author uses are nice though). Author mostly uses present tense instead of past tense which makes it a bit uncomfortable to read and the character's appearances aren't described well(I don't know what the characters look like). The story is a bit rushed in the beginning and a lot of things aren't explained clearly. The background also isn't explained much so I don't know how or when he gets to places. (I don't know if he's running or walking he's just there somehow) The whole story is a bit vague(?) to me because I can't really focus on what's going on.