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Why does Itachi have his Sharingan active? His eyes should be black at the moment.
I know it said he got the jutsu from his parents but the Shadow Clone Jutsu is a S or A rank forbidden Jutsu. It's forbidden because the massive amount of chakra needed to summon even a single clone and if used and you don't have enough it could kill the user, I believe. Since you never stated his parents rank I ignored how his parents could have it. But for him who only has enough chakra to perform a single Rasangun, he definitely doesn't have enough chakra to perform the Shadow Clone Jutsu.
Everything now a days gives cancer supposedly.
I always felt that I would feel very disrespected if an enemy I failed to defeat even with 2 of my strongest friends and failed only for him to let me live and give me a title for it.
Villains in Chinese writings always like to blame others for their sins
Just want to point out it is a bit weird to leave a 5yo child alone after his mother just got attacked and hurt by a monster.
This is weirdly worded. You can say "For two years, you have dedicated your fist while feeling gratitude to me. When the time comes I will reward you." Or something along those lines.
Renamon from Digimon
Should be 0.001%
It said she was diagnosed with an illness at 12
A affordable reasonable priced one.
Here's the nationalism you see in MLT novels.
I'm not sure how tall our MC is but Toji is 6'2ft or 181cm tall so I figured our MC is around that height. But 6ft in One Piece is not that tall when giants or humans around 12ft exist. Just wanted to say this when you said his "towering figure".
I don't give reviews at all really but this story is phenomenal. One thing I can happily say is I'm glad I found this story when it is 1000+ chapters. I binged read 200 in a day and definitely of rarer quality on for the fanfiction section. I suggest giving this story a chance because it would be a regret not to.