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Hi, Author is here with the first review of her book! This is time travel plus historical romance where the MC goes into the past to search for a precious blue stone and learns many new things and becomes the Empress from Commander. The first three chapters of the novel are about the background of the entire novel- Sylvia's breakup with her boyfriend Chris, the story of blue stone, and how her grandfather sends her to the past without telling her his actual motive. The actual book starts from chapter 4 where Sylvia meets the Crown Prince and her hunt for the blue stone begins. I hope you will like this comedy+historical+romance+action+adventure fusion and crazy antics of the female lead to get her love. The setting of the story is based on the tenth century, with fictitious places, names, and culture. It doesn't follow European or Asian culture or setting.
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Oh my my! Here are so many fault detectors after every para! please read my novel then. I need u guys there! I invite u to correct my mistakes and thrash me like this. How about we create a council of faultfinders and advisors?
Why are you all suggesting what she should do? its author's choice to write those words. 😂 Don't pick up faults in everything and at unnecessary places. U will miss the goodness of the story.
I liked the book. I am reading it for guidance for my upcoming novels. But as a reader, I only found two problems. This novel should be written from one point of view that is either the first person or the third person. The shifting of narration from one to third is disturbing and maybe breaking the rule of literature or one straight flow of the narration. If it is written in past tense then how did it change to present at the end of the chapter? Why nobody is amending the grammatical errors?