Extasy

Very interesting thanks for the chapter.

Red the description mc is a civilian ninja without any bloodline one second later mc gets blood line from the system.......WTF why even waist time just give him the bloodline from the start.

It was good but I hate it when authors make Dai lee look like fools they are literally the best earth benders of the earth kingdom trained by one of the strongest avatars, and you try to tell me they are losing ti a bunch of 12 year olds? Atleast you tried to make them a bit more competent, but still exept mc I can't really imagine anyone else winning. Azula has blue flames and lightning well a stone wall , Zuko has a sword well a sword wall, May and Tylee stone walls all exept mc and the Petra are countered.

So mc just agreed to only do business true them allowing them to set any price they want? ....Is he an idiot or just an idiot 🙄 🤦

The World building, Character design can't give more than 3 stars due to this being a FF. It is well written the story development gets 2 stars( My personal taste, depends on the reader wiel point. ) The premise is good, although the mc will be broken with only Kakashi's sharingan or only Obito's can just teleport the head of the strongest ghouls in to kamui and it's gg. This is ok op mc is a tag but then the author went and added a system with missions to lead the plot by the nose, and a shop so mc can just buy his ass of off every situation, thereby trowing back every posability of mc being in danger and leaving no point of me reading past chapter 1. The author can limit the power of future novels mc's so there is a stakes will the mc be able to defeat the next opponents or will he die? Makes for a lot more interesting novel than mc has the ability to 1 shot the final boss from chapter 1 how will he survive the poor weak human. Focus more on the mc using a small arsenal of ability well / smart instead of just using op system to do everything for him.

So this is why pi did had so much baby oil, he just got a system.....

The story is interesting, however the characters themselves feel flat and kind of unrealistic, breathing the immersion. The Author should try to practice on the character dialoge.

If it's is a harem pls make it a hare. Of Judy's. There is no war in Bae sing se.

1 doesn't matter to me, as long as it is written good. 2 single FL probably Azula or the Female bounty hunter.

Frieren: Aura play your self..... VIOLINSOUNDS.....