Djkennyken

This story is good, so far. For me, the Mc is too passive. Right now, it is more wait and see the chaos I could bring. Compared to the first one where after training, he actively tried to change the world.

Ciri

Hope you get better soon. Also, the only thing I would commit on is relationships. It would be cool to how treats people outside the girls.

Dang Gil is such a softie. Beware the over protective dad

For new readers, it might feel chaotic. However, the characters feel real and organic compared to some fics with npc citizens. Overall it's a Skyrim with potential.

The story feels fast-paced and a little chaotic. However, the characters are real and intriguing.

Here is the start of the legendary merc Reign

I read 3 chapters and didn't understand the plot. I was wondering if you knew because it's a good story, I'm just lost.

I like that you included the part about learning guns. It would be cool to see him with custome gear. For example, if you do what I'm thinking, combing that deck with that person is op starting gear.

Interesting power set. It has good pacing, and the character isn't a murder hobo, but treats life as life and not a wish come true.