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Jyn_Chaos

Jyn_Chaos

Lv13

Douluo series is the best

2018-08-30 UnidoUnited States
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos8mth
    Comentou

    All hail the dark crow

    [ Ding! Great Crow of Dark Mystery is looking at you with anticipation]
    I Have Infinite Systems In The Immortal World
    Oriental · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos8mth
    Comentou

    In this remake are you going to add all the girls he had from the original arc bc overall in the original it felt really bloated bc he got to many girls from this arc. If you decide to be a 1 for 1 faithful remake that’s fine. I just think there’s a couple of girls from this arc that may not be needed.

    Ch 32 Saya's Family
    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos9mth
    Postado

    Excited that someone in the community is doing a remake. Best of luck especially with cutting down the beginning arcs and fixing grammar mistakes. Overall excited for this remake and hopefully contuation of the story when it gets to that point. Good Luck 👍

    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos9mth
    Respondeu a Jwunder_99

    I think you can just leave it as is but maybe make a comment about it in the future with updated info. Like saying that they didn’t actually know until they got to that level to see how destructive a being who increase there soul level really gets.

    A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.
    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos9mth
    Comentou

    I think you missed a chapter the jump between chapters doesn't flow well

    Ch 17 Barl City
    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos9mth
    Comentou

    Knowing whats to come in the future i think the description of soul levels should be updated bc a strong/peak soul 2 can definitely desimate a city let alone a hous

    A level 2 soul from the beginning can be considered as super men by breaking their first physical limitation and since these people are stronger, the usefulness of firearms will decline immensely at this level, although they can't be considered immune to them yet. Here the individual begins to integrate a type of energy into his body to strengthen it.
    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos9mth
    Comentou

    Thank you for pick this up I enjoyed reading his story mistakes and all but knowing someone will have good editing and possible continuation of the story I wish you the best of luck🫡

    Ch 1 Reborn
    Soul Evolution System: Reborn
    Fantasia · Jwunder_99
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Fix the grammar for the cultivation relams get confusing with the names

    Ch 4 Sea Opening Realm Sixth Stage.
    Han Li Marries a wife and live long.
    Fantasia · Rahmon_Lora
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Respondeu a EvilisMyNature

    Fair if it’s not your strong suit just keep up the good work

    There won't be a harem or romance element, and while there may be some crush of females, it won't be like other novels and won't be shown much.
    Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data
    Oriental · EvilisMyNature
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Sadge lack of romance/harem for a novel like this makes me wanna stop. But overall still interesting story so ill continue for now

    There won't be a harem or romance element, and while there may be some crush of females, it won't be like other novels and won't be shown much.
    Cultivation PC: I Became Stronger By Downloading and Installing Data
    Oriental · EvilisMyNature
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    You got stop saying top G its cringe mate

    Este número foi suprimido.
    MMORPG: Rise of The Dungeon Master.
    Fantasia · Champsing
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Congratulations !!

    Alright, My novel finally became contracted. Now, I need to stockpile. Hehe.
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 141 Under the Table
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    There's no such thing as to many girls the more the merrier

    Ch 135 House Invasion
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    He's got to use it for the meme

    " Whew, Hypnosis, eh? It's really here. But for the sake of girls, I will destroy such an evil book. But well, Let me learn it first."
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Respondeu a Sammy_Amigo

    That be funny😵‍💫😵‍💫

    " Hmph, Think whatever you want. All I can tell you want someone to use a special poison to kill you. However, Your benefactor sealed the poison in your veins. So, Your life got saved, but your abilities were sealed."
    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Postado

    Except for the few grammar mistakes here and there the story is good. I hope the author introduces ether female protagonist or female villains in the story. keep up the constant updates hope this novel does well.

    Villainous Young Master's Otherworldly Harem
    Fantasia · starry8sword
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 13 CHAPTER 13: Collective thoughts
    Old Man Cultivator with Sex System
    Fantasia · SimpIF
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    More chapters and keep up the great work

    Ch 32 Not a chapterrrr >..<. (Will be deleted after 1-2 days)
    The plot collapses: All the heroines are broken!
    Urbano · Sheizzcoldasice
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  • Jyn_Chaos
    Jyn_Chaos1yr
    Comentou

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 83 A Lovely Sister
    Festering Desire
    Urbano · thegrandmagi
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