crazy_wizard

My first was Warlock in the magus world and I still compare new stories with it

The only problem is that the updates are too slow

No black eyes

Daym surely the other soul on earth was a martial arts prodigy

Floor boss on season 4 part 2

If in a dangerous situation, I would still read the next line after this one

Smarter than most protags who let their enemies escape without thinking

Well dude, I saw your profile and imma say the same thing, you gotta tone down your comments

Well I'm not that opposed to harem so BIG QUESTION: How big is the harem in this webnovel? Cause I can't handle 10 ladies with one man, thats stuff of royalty not common man

I've read till chapter 46, it's not much but some things did not sit well with me. In the middle was a chapter where the mc narrated an entire 'scene' to someone else which should not happen. Imo it should have been made into a separate scene, which the mc remembers as a flashback. There were other things like too little information on the mc. The mystery needs to be hidden I know, but you've gotta give the reader at least something, or it will become boring quickly. Those mysteries just help the mc sometimes like plot armor and then vanish like they were never there and the mc suspects nothing(maybe that or he just doesn't want to remember, or like he's running away from them). These were two things that didn't sit well with me. Thank you. If this story becomes better later I will pick it up again maybe