Davlyn

multiple repetitive paragraphs and even chapters, was expecting slice of life interspersed with smut featuring bug loving puppet master mc. got genius MC who acts unbelievably dumb with weird inconsistent power up mechanics and way more fighting than I personally signed up for. pro decent smut interesting fml semi fresh monster ecology interesting power up con bipolar / dumb mc inconsistent poorly planned power up snarky convo between mc/ai that never stops women ok with harem but enjoy setting the back yard on fire mc can't walk 5ft without getting into a fight despite having an army of companions who should and occasionally do protect mc from random mobs

Honestly, would've been a solid 4; but, the nationalism almost ruins it. Gets off course towards the end, but the author reels it in and ends the story in a slightly less than satisfactory and abrupt way lol. Kinda a weird choice of power up system (dual cultivation) considering there's not a single lemon to be had in the whole book. Easy to digest, simple power scheme, amusing for the most part. 4/5 if you can ignore the nationalism and hypocritical world view, 2/5 if you can't.

Another great and 'fresh' idea ruined by an overzealous and rather faulty idea of nationalism. MC isn't super Op but rather falls in a fairly acceptable upper middle range. Focuses more on development than fight scenes, at least until chapter 90 or so when I completely lost interest in it. Grammar is pretty good, at least it doesn't detract from the readability. Honestly, if the discriminatory mindset wasn't so blatant, it would probably be a 4/5(would definitely recommend) for me. Unfortunately, as it stands, I have to give it a 2/5 (wouldn't bother wasting my coins).

Well written, nothing much more to add. The slightly irritating parts aren't overwhelmingly so, not too many repetitive fight scenes, smut isn't over the top. Only honest gripe is how annoying the fmls can be, but honestly it barely registers comparatively speaking. Short, sweet, and only mildly irritating at times. Overall 4ish/5; would recommend.

Endearing start, taboo cliches, surprisingly little nationalism. Irritating changes in character and repetitive phrases to accommodate word padding. FML treated as a dumb ditsy weakling. Slow paced with no real improvement, ML ignores system use "Father system" and spends more time speaking sweet nothings to his wife than raising and teaching his children. 20ish Shameless plugs into other books you have to pay for if you want to buy in bulk and get a discount. All of that, while moderately irritating, doesn't detract from what is at minium, a well written book. What does disgust me and ultimately made me regret reading it, was the random weird cultivation turn that ultimately serves no purpose. If I wanted a cultivation hack'n'slash, they're a dime a dozen. I definitely wouldn't be reading a story that purportedly revolves around a 'father system' As for coherent grammatically correct writing, it is on point, so if my complaints sound like 'noting much' to you, you will probably enjoy it.

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I liked library of heavens path, even if it's just a fan fic of a light novel I think i might give it a go... so tired of 7 chapters stupid fight scenes 2 chapters plot development 3 chapters buffing/nerfing mc only to rinse and repeat lmfao

Started off good, but plot holes, errors, and silly decisions ruined it. Unless you're really bored, I wouldn't recommend it.

it's decent, right up to 200 where it basically becomes a different book lol... idk if a few chapters got miss placed but it makes no sense after that point

Synopsis, tags, and title; had me expecting op necro Rick rolling skele bangers... I got sad, arrogant, cowardly, stupid mc; no necro skele bangers.......To be fair, it's well written and probably someone's cup of tea; just not mine. 3/5 Left me feeling Rick Ashley'