jaybay23911

Your doing a great job and I like the direction you've taken it. Hopefully you can keep balance of the narration from the simulation / reality, and not allow Eldrian to get to OP or things to get to whacky, without buildup. Really enjoying the story so far.

Fantastic novel, thoroughly enjoying the read. It might be slow for some but I truly enjoy the pacing. The MC is believable and not OP from the get-go which truly annoys me. Great read, so far, keep it up!