Wouldn't 'Tune in' also work? I'm not native speaker, but that was what first came to my mind.

Part 1 is in 431 iirc

Why? Doesn't it mean basically the same as 'man among men' but for women? Like doesn't it just mean she is an exceptional woman and nothing more?

Earlier she got a magic tablet. She mentioned it like in the beginning of the Chat Conversation. But it was just 'a' magic tablet. And now she talks about multiple tablets that helped her understand and my sleepy brain decided that those 'tablets' either appeared out of nowhere or it was the first one that multiplied. Now I would say that those are probably some kind of information window or something. Not sure honestly but that's my best guess.

That sentence makes way more sense now, especially after solid 7 hours of sleep. Thanks

And that should be for a judge to decide, who of those criminals should die and who should not.

And let's be honest: it shouldn't be his job. He catches them and that should be more than enough. They sholud be put to death like rabd animals that they are. Definitely not thrown into a super-jail or something, just dealt with permanently. And that's government's job.

'Dark side of the earth'? Really? You could go with 'supernatural shenanigans' or something and you went with 'dark side of the earth'? So you think you can get involved in 'the light side of the earth' or something?

How is that obvoius? I may be a bit sleep deprived but it isn't that obvious to me. Did I miss something?

And stating it outright didn't seem like it made any sense. I can see that someone went offline, but I never seen any notification about it, no matter the messaging app.

Too cheap imo. Could make them work a bit for it and if he actually spend his points then that could help in establishing his personality a bit more. Would he ask for something in exchange? Let it go as 'good guy' should? Something else? You gave him points, you could have given a bit more too buy those stories and let us get to know him more.

I would focus more on the 'hidden task' part, as this could mean that doing more than required by mission could be rewarded, but I'm just an annoying reader so don't mind me.

You could try though? There is nothing stopping ou from trying to get stronger.

Really? 'The burning immortal rooster'?

First time I agree with Author: it wasn't bad idea, especially with how obsessed Rias seems to be with japanese culture. Others could react badly but that could in itself be nice idea to get some interesting interactions out of them as a group.

Author, do you maybe need some help with finding wiki? Because it's fourth chapter and you can't seem to get some basic facts straight. Searching 'Gasper dxd' took me about 10 seconds to find correct page and in first paragraph you can find that Gasper is a Bishop.

So yeah, again, why would she not know what berries are if she is in Totsuki? She cooks and she knows what strawberries are, so why?

I know Erina's past was complicated (or is complicated? If it isn't 'past' yet, but 'present' for now?) but not knowing what berries were? She had some childhood before Azami started his 'training'.

Would reporter really use words 'guy in red'?

Maybe 'They often try to capture the Superman, calling him "the Red Boy" or using other silly names'? Because now it sounds like they try to catch all of them: the Superman, the Red Boy and 'other silly names', not one person with multiple silly nicknames.