yokedjaguar
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Honestly, he's the most useless mc I've ever read. He has soooo much power but can't do anything. He loves a wife that has no desire to be with him, unless theres another woman involved and then shes jealous. He has the ability to cut loose ends but doesn't. But complains about it throughout the entire story. The plot is even more atrocious as its been used 80 times in the past month. So to put it frankly; it's a sh*tty story.
This ff is written by Sir Lucifer Morningstar, its on fanfiction.net. It's called a Precise note. However I'm not sure if webnovel author is the oa or not. If he isn't; Stop selling a story that's not yours, if it is; good on you for sharing this story on other platforms.
Didn't even read it. Just read the synopsis. 2 of the most important parts of the story on a website is the synopsis and the first chapter. If the synopsis looks like that, then I know exactly what the rest is going to look like.
The plot is great. The golden finger is below average due to the strength being OP, the dialogue is terrible, and the grammar could be proofread. As soon as the dialogue and grammars fixed, this would definitely be the best DC FF.
Without a doubt, the best written story on this app. That encompasses all novels and fanfics. I've read far too many novels and ff's, so again from personal experience; this is the best writing I have seen in all my 5 years on this app. Not only that, the plot itself is quite nice, and it's different. The flow of the story is consistent, it's adventurous, it has a slice-of-life vibe to it, the character has an actual past, and there's been some decent (but not alot) of character development. Most of its recent development but development regardless.
4th wall break every 2 seconds. 2 different chapter skips, I'm good. also skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment skip this comment