TheMightyPerez

I've added this in: Dom looked around the room to see the reactions of his Heroes at Meritamen's comment. It was key that he gave them some structure in his first absence of the game since he started playing. He found it strange how these game characters made everything feel so real, and he didn't want to disappoint them.

thanks, I'll amend it tomorrow!

it was supposed to follow directly from the last chapter, but looks like I've missed some " at the beginning. do you feel it needs a small paragraph before to prompt what the conversation is about?

thank you so much for the review! happy you are on the journey with me.

it's the best type of security - secured security (I'll reword at somepoint thanks for pointing it out)

thank you!!

it's definitely an idea. I planning to ask for ideas in the comments on next chapter.

Thank you so much for this review, it meant a lot. happy you are enjoying it and good luck with your own work!

genuinely added that section in just for you! ha

neither can I! I've got some exciting story lines planned! (or atleast I think they are)