Kakkarotto

Very good writing quality but very poor story design . There is no sense of anticipation in the first half of the story because of the synopsis.

It doesn't work like that. He didn't directly save her life. It was indirect. Otherwise lifedebt would be so much more common

The plot of the story is extremely similar to swallowed star. Just different cheats. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Well the current energy feedback is negative which means fusion consumes more energy than it's producing. Just think about iron man arc reactor the bigger one.

Obviously

Mafs bruh. .. .

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