XenonNoble
Not much to know about me really, basically a waste of time for you to be reading this. Seriously, there's nothing here. Don't you have something to read now? You should probably go and do that then.
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I’m sorry, how’d he come to the conclusion the WORLD was at stake? Even if he was just joking, it sounds SUPER lame.
More money. Always more.
Oh, this is a translation?
You did well. I think the crying on the marriage rejection was a little far. But on the verge of tears and confused would definately fit.
That name is weak. Would’ve been cooler if he was quite.
With Jiraiya, he still sent back reports (he’s Konoha’s spymaster). As for Tsunade, she didn’t really hide, more just stayed away and Konoha ignored her depressive state, plus she is a notorious gambler (“the sucker”). Orochimaru, he is in contact with Danzo.
Or Robert when he becomes King
I typed wyvern - autocorrect
This their first year. Also a family that kicked out a failure and looks down on him wouldn’t see it as a problem. Also in the game according to MC after the why’ve r attack (day 1) he was fired.
Honestly, I was entertained. Brought some change to a cliche ROB introduction and made it a little fresh. Nice work.
Haha, I love Sgt Johnson
Yes! Ok, good, pumping the brakes a little is good.
Aww, no shonen shenanigans of converting an enemy to a loyal friend? Would’ve been funny. Also Wisk is a public figure.
Aww, was hoping he would be more mafia related missions (like shonen mafia type stuff)
Probably not a good idea to suddenly lose an hour of sleep when you are adding more “work” to your timetable. Maybe after you get used to using free hours for writing without negatively affecting you.
Bro, is he gonna get reminded at every single obstacle? Like, I wanna cheer for him, but his actions and attitude are getting very hard to like as a reader.