KOTOMINE
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I have not misunderstood, the answer I was giving you was to tell you to relax. You do not have to give such a serious Review in a Fanfic, if you are going to do it try to think that I am a novice writer and that it would be better to give constructive criticism instead of a serious Review. In fact if I had taken it wrong, I would not have thanked you for the Review. Likewise, I just wanted to tell you that I have nothing against you and I would appreciate criticism that helps me improve instead of telling me the mistakes I have and leaving it at that. Anyway, I thank you again for the review and I will try to improve in writing, maybe when my holidays come I can dedicate myself to improving some things. I hope you were not offended by my answer since that was not my intention.
First, thanks for the review. Second, this is a fanfic, it is obvious that I will change some things to make it more convenient for me to write (If you want I will copy you all the League of Legends novels, biographies, etc. And I will sell them to you as stories) Although that would not be funny. Third, I use Micrisoft Translator, I only let me translate a maximum of 200 words, it is obvious that English was going to look a bit strange, I am in my first year studying English. So if you have more time please give me more of these reviews and tell me where the errors are. Although I suppose for someone who has the time to do serious reviews on a fanfic which is not a job. Do you really think that I would worry about something as miniscule as orthography? I have to work, study at the university and now I am changing to live alone, I try to answer all the doubts that the readers have, in fact, I am doing this answer while playing a game of Lulu Ad. (**: I don't make any money with this, so if you want something serious I would recommend you go see Akika40, although I suppose his English is better than mine, right?) Thx again for the Review.
The truth is I do it because they are the champs that I have more knowledge of. My mains are Tristanna, Lulu, Poppy, and Morgana. Sorry if you don't like it, but since I have knowledge about those champions I make them appear first, and then I can investigate the others.
I don't want to sound stupid, but I'm the only one who believes that having sex in the first 50 chapters causes no real breakthrough in romance, it's more like a carnal relationship. That's why I try to make there first romance and then sex. I hope you forgive me for this but I believe in romance. It's like in Re: Zero, the Subaru that I made is not a pussy, it just doesn't have enough time for that, he had to fight Elsa, he had to save the children of the town, he had to attend the real elections , had to fight the whale. Also, I don't like body-only relationships very much, it's as if you did it with a girl and then she did it with another and it reminds me of NTR, I have a deep hatred for that gender, my girlfriend cheated on me with another guy even before that we saw each other naked and we only had 8 months of relationship ... Sorry, I didn't mean to bother you with this ... It's just ... I don't want the relationship to be meaningless, I would like to slowly cultivate romance.