James_Horn

your writing as if he was a petulant child

that is not even the point in the Harry potter world they were not even called magus wizard witch and sometimes warlock but never magus and they definitely did not call it magica or magical powers it was magic plain and simple

it is a translated work they never get anything right

Elias is the only name that ends with s and Beth is the only name that begins with b

you know if they ever settled on the Kuja island they would only give birth to females you know that right so why would you want to stay on Kuja island

I can say it is alright there are definitely parts that are not fluid in but overall it is better then the ones that are usually reupdated

alright I will look forward to it

just pick one already and keep it

not worth reading with how short the chapters are

this is something you should read only if your really bored and have nothing to do and trying to go to slèep