Discarded

you understand that this is King's war game not servant battles game? if you think like that, is there any point on recreating this war?

Edo era huh. rather peculiar era you pick. instead of warring state era when Nobunaga and other legends still living, you actually pick Edo era where Tokugawa reign. I wonder what characters and conflict you seek there? Shinsengumi?

nvm my previous reviews. this book is translated version of Chinese novel. and this translation isn't faithful to the original book either. xiaotian gender should be female so her pronoun should be 'she' not 'it'. also this book is alrdy translated far ahead than this translation. just search : The Cannon Fodder Turns His Sister Into A Soaring Phoenix

you forgot the introduction and yet herta know his name alrdy

it's rare to see author who won't fall in easy way of writing system, op, level or other gimmicks trope out of nothingness which defy the law of cause and effect. you might not popular for writing a sensible story but I respect you for taking the hard way and I dare say the more proper way for writing story.

still smarter than brain dead system. at least with this emanated things, there is an actual cause and effect law which enable a valid backstory why MC is strong. not some nonsense system appearing out of thin air giving out reward without proper cause and effect. I'm quite happy with this concept instead of usual brain dead *DING out of nothingness system. imagine being so critics to story with proper power lore and taking system nonsense as a matter of standard. this whole webnovel is brainwashed ghouls. just wait for a more backstory or revelation in later chapter instead of bashing on early. people won't ask proper explanation about system, why you so harsh on something with more reasonable power?

really good start

I'll pass on this book

dude ain't no way man think like that in that situation not after just revived and in confusion mess. poor writing

define 'expressing'