sagaaaa

mouth watering

I liked this chapter better, It felt more.. real? Dunno if tht's the word

I think you forgot to put an offend after the afford to

i think it would be more easy on the tongue to say "-maintenance gear for swords-", but this is me nitpicking

smithy starts?

sad

I'd say which, but maybe it isn't right, I am not a native speaker

Still pretty long, arming swords (most heavily used sword in the middle ages) were between 70 to 80 centimetres, but it's a good length, ust less controllable.

Yeah mennnnn!!!

pretty nice chap