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Terra manipulation= materialistic control (Earth, metal, plants, water, or anything for him to control. Plus combine it with psychic control and that will be a crazy law.
maybe MC can be the god of skills, if you want to be a fight you can , if you want to be a Crafter trading your old skills for new ones.
MC can be the ultimate body user. Full points into his body for recovery. Full points into his intelligence for learning whatever. And regular mode for base training, and his different modes for selective training.
Author you can tell that you wanted the story to end at 100+ chapters, Because the pacing is like a fast and furious movie.
No the bandits didn't react to her flying or floating at all.
The key points of the story were not flushed out, His magic training, the weapon testing for all the weapons. And the dungeons were glossed over like you were looking at it from a speeding car. Plus the way he is being talked to by his people and father. He killed an earth dragon, and a wryern.
just like the beast Nation, So what's your point.
oh yeahhhhh why would he help different places that's not his home land. "Beast Nation"!!
Sorry Author but the immersion in tone of your book is so disconnected. They are talking there young Lord/master like coworkers, And if flying magic is rare the minute she started to float. They would have been shocked and fearful. "Not this" so please go back and rewrite the whole story because important information and section was rushed and not flushed out.
Author the fight doesn't make sense, the drain from a couple spells is inconsistent.