Charly_MadSon

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You should change the name of the FF to something like "IronMan reborn in Transformers" [img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived][img=Unalived]

Vanh prime in the world of DxD? They're going to devour the boy to the bones, read it!! (the system modification is great) I definitely hope for more chapters!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=strong]

Here we go again!!! [img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong][img=recommend][img=strong]

I hope you're completing the Natlan map 100%, because there's no better excuse for the 2 months of waiting, I mean, it took me 1 week to finish all the basics of the Sumeru map using my free time, I hope it resumes soon.

damn! You can't leave a chapter like that! I will die waiting for the next one. [img=angry][img=angry][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A gem among so much mediocrity, don't miss it!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

A fanfic with a good idea but a somewhat unsatisfactory development, I'm not referring to the writing, but to something that most writers fail at, the world building, in this fic it feels deficient, almost as if it had no ideas for the development and ran towards the canon events to avoid thinking about this and only alter what it wants, in the same way in my opinion if you are going to introduce new characters give them more than one chapter to get to know them better, after all if you kill someone and make it dramatic, you don't feel a connection and even less some sadness for someone you've only known in a few lines, explore more the fact that he began to live with the group even years before the events, how this can change the group and the repercussions of it and don't just jump in time to the part that suits you, I hope these things don't stop you, keep trying, you have a great writing base and good ideas.

I must say that it is a decent work, a somewhat slow but stable pace, a new way of character development and timeline, the only thing I hate is Elenalise's new state (I didn't like her state in the original work either) but acceptable In everything else, I hope for more chapters.

Is it just me? or is this a damn summary of the same game? I played Vice City many times, why do I want a summary or a book about it?[img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted]