Can you please name your volumes as per worlds, or are they going to be mixed.

You wanted her to be Mc's 'daughter' and didn't know how to go about it. Should have just put is as AI have emotional know how and manipulated Mc into accepting her as a daughter. Very far fetched I know but you can develop on this by writing a AI pov chapter or chapters.

No, one calls their seniors "Sir". If Creator and Sir are all the same, then what will you call your teachers, elders, and seniors in your workplace?

no matter how much you are prepared for it seeing such a scene and knowing that one is partly responsible for it. the reaction would be anything ranging between guilt, horror, and an urge to run. Ask anyone working in hospitals, the army, and in a cemetery.

didn't she call him sir before, then why change now.

"he signed", showed that he really doesn't care for the people who died, lost there body parts and families. and him helping the people after the "signing" looks like he is doing some them a huge favor. I know that he would have never known that, that man would blow him self up. But Signing after would be not a thing that a past common gamer would have done, they would have being horrified. Either you the author don't know how emotions work or MC is a self absorbed Narcissist.

Put your chapters through an Ai editor tool. You are missing many punctuation marks.

Which Miles Morales is this, the Spiderman or someone else.

Reading this story with no serious mind exercise and with a child's heart, this chapter is just right enough fun and not serious at all.

Those are some heavy titles for such a small cute boy

Don't use Kali, as she is not a goddess you want to put against anyone, as even Shiva had to give-up and lay down in front of her to calm her anger. after she almost wiped out all of the demons. She is so powerful, as she was created from the wrath, anger, power, and knowledge of Tridevi. You can use Jalandhara, born from the flames that emanated from Lord Shiva's third eye. The flames were so intense that they formed into a powerful demon named Jalandhara. Jalandhara grew up to be a fierce warrior and had immense powers that made him almost invincible. He gained control over the ocean and created his own kingdom, which he ruled with an iron fist. you can get more info on him and all hindu gods here svastika.in/blogs/blog/jalandhara-god-the-demon-son-of-lord-shiva#:~:text=Lord%20Jalandhara%20was%20born%20from,that%20made%20him%20almost%20invincible.

It should have been lower income so that it could accommodate all future generations without a need for a time limit and a strict focus on education and not jobs, as you will have economic diversity no matter how strong a nation is. Even if we have a unified earth, it will exist, mainly dependent on people and there willingness to work for there own future. You will have lazy people and some outright non-functional people; heck, even ants have those. So what is children of these individuals if they have any, decided to change there future? In such a case, reservations will be a big help.

*download 'an' extension....... F***king auto correct.

Kumagawa Misogi MC of Medaka Box Power is All fiction (in essence "Because I want it to happen it will happen") and complete awareness. Look him up and I also want MC here to interact with him in very deadly situation only.

Here is an idea Use Grammarly or Quillbot for punctuation marks like ( . , ! Etc). You see without these symbols within a sentence or para it reads like reader only has a single breathe to read it. Also don't mix match words like Amma (Grandmother) Just write Grandmother or Grandma,even if sentence are said in Hindi translate them to English.

is it a Chinese translation Or your Original FF Sorry if it seems wrong But Synopsis sounds more like Chinese

Inhumans they are often ignored in Marvel comics FF.