Xavier_Kaito
I will fight my destiny for a one in a million chance that I will experience my own samsara and be reborn into a flaming phoenix.
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Xavier_Kaito3 days agoPostadoThis is very good, the best fanfic Naruto with One Piece elements I've ever seen, the author did his best to ensure that the balance of power wasn't destroyed
- Xavier_Kaito4 days agoPostado
The story is well paced but sometimes gets a bit repetitive. However despite some repetitiveness, the story is is quite enjoyable and shows promise in the upcoming chapter. Hope the auther keeps the consistency
- Xavier_Kaito8 months agoPostado
t's a good start and the writing structure is good too. I'm looking forward to more adventure and excitement coming from this book. It's a shame you didn't continue this story because it had great potential.
- Xavier_Kaito9 months agoRespondeu a Feebling
Could you tell me the original name of the story because someone deleted the comment about the name?
- Xavier_Kaito3 years agoPostado
A beautifully done translation and I see that many in the comments ask for the original story so here it is: https://b.faloo.com/html_1184_1184624/ But I recommend you to read the story of the translator because Chinese is very complex to understand and it's all the more nice to read the story of the person who works to translate it.
- Xavier_Kaito3 years agoComentou
Oui
- Xavier_Kaito4 years agoRespondeu a Firez_3140
No, I don't think I'm going to continue the story started by cywsaphyre because I'm currently overloaded with my studies and extracurricular activities. I recommend you search with the fanfiction name to see if anyone else has continued this story. Sorry for the late reply.
- Xavier_Kaito4 years agoRespondeu a One_True_King
No, I don't think I'm going to continue the story started by cywsaphyre because I'm currently overloaded with my studies and extracurricular activities. I recommend you search with the fanfiction name to see if anyone else has continued this story. Sorry for the late reply.
- Xavier_Kaito4 years agoComentou
Ivy Potter or Daphne is the best option for you in the story because so far you have built the characters to be sort of rivals and furthermore the development of the story means that the main character will have contact with both families. Personally, I prefer Fleur as I expect a development of why she falls in love with the main character (Common interests in magic, Intellectual chemistry...) as in the myriad of other fanfics, more often than not she magically falls in love with the main character because of her veela lineage which I find too simple, yes that may be one of the reasons but you need to add others to make it feel authentic.
Este capítulo foi suprimido. - Xavier_Kaito4 years agoComentou
No, just Edthyne.
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